Critique on a shoot I did?

[straightintodark]

Hello! I am new to this website, as of today. I did a shoot yesterday with my first hired model, and I was wondering if I could maybe get some feedback on the results :D Don't be too harsh.


http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22573109


http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22573162


http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22573181


http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22573277


http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22573328


So, favourite? Least favourite? Hate them all? Anything constructive is welcome, just so long as it isn't overly harsh. Much appreciated :D